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I would work on keeping still objects in frame from not moving, even a little bit. It's clear that you redrew the parts in for a couple frames. (I'm terrible at describing what you're doing wrong) but yeah just try to maintain frame consistency. You also might want to work on voice acting, which wasn't convincing. You can find plenty of voice actors and actresses on newgrounds. Also be sure you add in sound effects. They're imperative for almost all animations.
All in all it's clear you show promise as an animator. You just need some practice.

This was damn good.

This was pretty funny man! I'd suggest coloring a bit and making a better background. Other than that the animation was nice. You show promise! If you ever need a voice actor let me know.

VortexVisionz responds:

Like I said, I created this short bit a couple of years ago and I didnt have an animation tablet at the time lol. As for the voice acting check your messages on your youtube channel

Pretty good but the backgrounds could use a little more work. Also it should be a faster fight IMO.

Can't say I'm a fan of the art style but the animation was awesome!

Intrapulation responds:

I found this style easier to work with, rather than the traditional.

You really made this?? This is awesome!

I thought this was clean, creative and funny! Kudos to all those who helped create it. If you need any voice actors let me know!

Great job Yotam!

Pretty good animation! I'd recommend including a bit more dialogue. Also I didn't quite know what was going on storywise.

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Alex Kaelke @Raccatoons

Age 29, Male

Animator, VA

OU 2020

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