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Voice acting was funny and the animation was really good. Great job!

Y'all killed this one, great work!!

Very, very cute animation. I liked this a bunch!

God bless u Yotam

Good lord, this was amazing, but so fucked!! Great job!

BigCronch responds:

Thank you so much!

You are a god damn master. Always love seeing your insane animations!!

Oh my god, this was completely brilliant. I loved every minute! Your art style has so much charm and appeal to it, and the special effects were on point! The secondary sound effects were also appreciated, it added so much to the environment of the scenes! I can only wonder what kind of animations you're capable of making these days. Fantastic work!!

Great job man! I really love how disturbing you make your characters look. Aang especially looks incredible in this. The voice acting is also really good.

There are a couple things that stuck out to me though, one of which was the initial composition on Zuko. There's a bit too much negative space behind him. When a character is looking in a particular direction, it's always better to give them room in the direction they're looking.

A line that didn't really make sense to me was, "I just wanna take you in so I can play my PS2 and wear my favorite pair of shoes." It just didn't make sense or add to the story in any way. How are those relevant to his character, in that moment?

I'd also like to see a little more variation in poses, like I get you wanna get these out quickly but all the characters stay in the same pose for almost the entire cartoon, and it disengages the viewer when you do that. You wouldn't even necessarily have to move them a bunch, you could just try mixing up the camera angles (not counting zooms) to tell a better story visually. You do that at 1:09 with an OTS shot, that's about it for their initial conversation.

That said, still a great job. Love the burnt hotdog line. Keep on keeping on, it's fantastic to see good, original parodies on this site again.

meatcanyon responds:

I appreciate this constructive criticism. A lot of time went into it and I appreciate that. I agree that the animation is stuff, in partial that’s because that’s just how I like it. I think it’s visually funny and fits the action of the characters dialogue being given, but to be fair I could try and play around with some more poses and liven scenarios up.

Thank you

Meat

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OU 2020

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