Raccatoons's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kem and Meg | Camera]

Fantastic work, super appealing stuff! I could see a whole show being done in this style it's really great.

[Youtubes Copyright System]

Dude, this is amazing. Instant follow.

TheMartoon responds:

Thank you!! I appreciate it

[BUTTER]

Visually this was super appealing, you clearly know how to draw, animate, and color exceptionally well, but I don't feel like the story was there, and with all due respect I didn't quite understand the point of this.

To make things more interesting, I'd add a bit more conflict into what you make next time, and make the theme of it very clear as quickly as possible. The only conflict I saw here was the main character trying to grab the remote which wasn't terribly interesting due to the overall length of this. This definitely felt longer than it needed to be unfortunately, the butter dude's monologue just honestly felt tired pretty early on. Before doing another original toon, you might wanna try just writing more short stories first, so you really get that part down before going further with production. The most important thing I think would be figuring out how to make your characters more interesting. Have as many people (preferably writers) look at your script as possible. The more feedback, the better.

The stuff you've put out overall is very awesome, but I don't wanna bullshit you and just leave a 5 star and be done with it, I think your original stuff could be a lot better if you improve the writing! Best of luck on your next project man.

[TTS - S1E6 - SHOTS MIS-FIRED [1ST-HALF]]

Super awesome visual style! This was fun!

[smeargle used sketch]

really awesome work!! keep it up!

[KIRBY SAFETY VHS]

Very stinkin grand!

[My Only Lola Bunny]

I hope I can make stuff this awesome someday. You really are incredible dude.

[Take Your Time]

your stuff... my man.. your stuff is so good. FUCK!

[Snow Dinos]

Wow man! Didn't know you animated! This is awesome and cute, perfect Christmas cartoon! Great job!