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[Sublo & Tangy Mustard #8 - Roommate]

Backgrounds are on point as usual! Tito is a super convincing bum with his voice and movements so great job on that. The sound at 1:36 when Sublo frowned was super subtle but added so much. Also I hope the white stain on Tito's pants is mayo or something.

[Sublo & Tangy Mustard #6 - New Look]

Fantastic episode! I always love seeing these. The way you draw is super unique and expressive!

[Yu-Gi-OH! Heart of my Cards]

Pretty good toon, but try not to spoil the funniest bits on twitter next time ya goon!

[Sonic's Problem]

That was pretty funny, and really well made!

[The Mama Luigi Project - Super Mario World Reanimated Collab 2017]

Awesome to see the final project! Mind throwing me over there in the credits? :S

[NinjaSexParty Peppermint Creams Music Video]

Killer!!

[Sublo & Tangy Mustard #5 - Opposites]

Awesome work as always Aaron!! I gotta draw some fanart sometime I love this series.

[The Forgotten Video]

That managed to tug on my heart strings AND make me laugh. Very well done sir.

[Sonic the Hedgehog: A Dark Secret]

The animation and backgrounds were all really great. I really liked the visuals and sound effects you threw in, they really tied the whole cartoon together. Tails running up to sonic was seriously the funniest shit. The voice acting was decent too.
I will say though I don't think the memey stuff wasn't good for this (WHAT ARE THOOOOSE, sanic, rustling jimmies). I thought it really took away from the quality of the whole animation. Seriously, "what are those" joke came out of nowhere and I feel like you could've done more with the Shadow bit. Plus, canned sound effects (such as that door opening sound effect at 1:24) should be avoided. I know it's tempting to use existing stuff like that, but you might want to look deeper for sound effects which are less well known already. It can ruin the immersion viewers have to hear stuff like that.
As for the ending, i think it would've been a lot better if you just cut it after tails said "too slow" to end with more of a shock value, rather than do the whole seinfeld thing, which I'm pretty sure everybody watching has seen parodies of already.
All in all, I liked this cartoon and hope to see more from you. You draw very well, and I like your style. Keep it up.

Narmak responds:

Thank you for such detailed feedback! To be honest, this animation was originally supposed to be a quick 1 minute thing for fun, but I always get way too into animating and then its becomes 4 minutes long :\
But yes, this was the only animation of mine that I did not storyboard before I created it, I kinda just went along with whatever. Also, is the door sound effect well known? I found it online and didn't recognize it as a common sound effect.

[Sonic's Deathbed]

That was really funny! I liked it a lot, great job.