Raccatoons's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Teaching about 👂]

This is so super cute, i loved it

[Evangelion Collab]

Loved it, great work everyone! Really funny shit, loved the expressions and creative animations. This might actually be my favorite NG collab yet!

Thriftman responds:

Swag

[Who Shot Mr. Burns: An Alternate Ending]

Tremendous work all around! The animation was fun and expressive and the voices were seriously so on point! Great stuff!

[Lucky Shart]

this is a TRUE, WORK, of ART!!!

[Niall's Skyrim Mods]

FUCKING. INCREDIBLE.

[Binggan&Xingyun - Ox New Year 2021]

Not gonna lie, the thumbnail made me think this character was suckin a big weiner

[FATHER FEUD 2]

Fucking incredible!! Loved it!!!

[Kem and Meg | Camera]

Fantastic work, super appealing stuff! I could see a whole show being done in this style it's really great.

[Youtubes Copyright System]

Dude, this is amazing. Instant follow.

TheMartoon responds:

Thank you!! I appreciate it

[BUTTER]

Visually this was super appealing, you clearly know how to draw, animate, and color exceptionally well, but I don't feel like the story was there, and with all due respect I didn't quite understand the point of this.

To make things more interesting, I'd add a bit more conflict into what you make next time, and make the theme of it very clear as quickly as possible. The only conflict I saw here was the main character trying to grab the remote which wasn't terribly interesting due to the overall length of this. This definitely felt longer than it needed to be unfortunately, the butter dude's monologue just honestly felt tired pretty early on. Before doing another original toon, you might wanna try just writing more short stories first, so you really get that part down before going further with production. The most important thing I think would be figuring out how to make your characters more interesting. Have as many people (preferably writers) look at your script as possible. The more feedback, the better.

The stuff you've put out overall is very awesome, but I don't wanna bullshit you and just leave a 5 star and be done with it, I think your original stuff could be a lot better if you improve the writing! Best of luck on your next project man.